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Lies - a poem!!!
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You gave this entry a 0... August 30, 2005
Reviewed by: drummer_boy Overall rating: 4
..lowering its score from 2.3990 to 2.3889!
I can't like this. I'll quickly get over the awful animation and drawing, because everyone notices that right way. However, the poem was pretty terrible. It was barely good enough to pass off as a cheap children's story, pawning lessons in morality and character building in easy-to-swallow, mind numbing "poetic" noise. I'll assume you wrote the poem yourself; otherwise I'll lose even more respect for you. You have no rhythm, and you rhyme for the sake of rhyming. Your reading is bland and rushed, and you put on a really creepy, fake British accent for no reason other than you think you can do it.
Other than that, of course, stellar work! ...
Graphics: 2 Sound: 5 Interactivity: 0 Style: 0 Violence: 0 Humor: 3
Great Choice of music and I'm sure your pa would be proud of you
it wouldnt load
It should :S.
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